Friday, May 14, 2010

Can you correct my essay about Missouri? Can you rewrite the whole thing? If not, feedback is fine~?

Missouri is a mid-western region in the United States and was admitted into union in 1821. It comprises 144 countries and 1 city and is measured 308 miles. Its symbols are the State Seal, State Flag, the Bluebird, the flower called Hawthorne, and the tree called Flowering Dogwood.


The Annual Events in Missouri are:


~January-March: Orchid Show(February); National Intercollegiate Basketball Tournament (March)


~April-June: Journalism Week; Maifest; Current River Canoe Race; Singing Event (May); Governor%26#039;s Fish Fry; J Bar H Rodeo (June).


~July-September: Mark Twain Fence Painting Contest (July); Ozark Empire Fair (August); Jaycee Boot Heel Rodeo (September).


~October-December: Flaming Fall Revue; Veiled Prophet%26#039;s Parade; Future Farmers of America National Convention; American Royal Livestock and Horse Show (October); Thanksgiving Day Turkey (November); Silver Skates Tournament; La Guignolee Festival (December)


Interesting places to visit are:


~Altenburg; in Perry County is a historical German community established in 1839


~Anderson House; was used as a hospital during the Civil War Battle of Lexington


~Harry S. Truman Library; with the history of U.S. foreign relations


~Elephant Rocks; located near Pilot Knob are collosal granite boulders worn into unpeciular shapes by the forces of nature


The Monthly Temperatures for Missouri are:


~December-Frebruary: 40F-29F


~March-May: 64F-12F


~June-August: 75F-24F


~September-November: 53F-33F


The Sports of Missori are:


~Basketball


~Baseball


~Golf


~Soccer


~Tennis


~Volleyball


~Softball


~Dance Team


~Crew


~Hockey


~Skating


~Football

Can you correct my essay about Missouri? Can you rewrite the whole thing? If not, feedback is fine~?
Home of the Professional sports team of: Kansas City Chiefs-Football


Kansas City Royals- Baseball


St. Louis Cardinals- basball


St. Louis Rams- Football





Lewis and Clark started out their expedition in St. Louis. to explore the Lousiana Purchase





Daniel Boone moved to Mo after living in Kentucky





The State of Missouri is the largest producer of Corn





The state of Missouri has the largest lead deposits.





There have been 1 president from the state of Missouri. Harry S Truman





Brad PItt and Cherly Crow are from Missouri


Paul Harvey is from Missouri

Dog Teeth

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